❎错误：Children are so immature psychologically that they can't distinguish between right and wrong. ✅正确：Children are so immature psychologically that they cannot distinguish between right and wrong. 在英语写作中，1-10的数字需要“写出来”，而且阿拉伯数字不能用在句子的开头。 ❎错误：Encouragement that students receive from their professors can take a lot of forms. ✅正确：Encouragement that students receive from their professors can take many forms. 在写作中，a lot of/lots of表示为“许多”，较为不正式，通常使用much或many等表示。 ❎错误：Great attention has been paid to the influence of pre-school education on a child's academic achievements and personal development. ✅正确：Parents are paying growing attention to the influence of pre-school education on a child's academic achievements and personal development. 在写作中，用“主动语态”代替“被动语态”。 ❎错误：Passion is the thing that holds ma belief and propels me to finsh the difficult task. ✅正确：Passion is the essential power that holds my belief and propels me to finsh the difficult task. Thing的使用使得语言过于抽象、含糊，因此需要换成具体的“实义”名词。 ❎错误：The roads were almot impassable. However, we atlast succeeded in reaching camp. ✅正确：The roads were almot impassable.At last,however we succeeded in reaching camp. However意义相当于nevertheless，在句子或从句中通常不在句首出现。 上面这些小问题，多少同学不经人提醒一直都发现不了，这些小的细节错误也会使同学们的托福作文观感不好，导致分数不理想😭所以一定要注意哦~📝示例：在游戏过程中，孩子们可以锻炼两种不同的核心能力：计划和管理资源的能力以及双手眼协调能力。
📝示例：学生们有很多种形式获得教授们的鼓励
📝示例：人们对于学前教育对孩子学术成绩和个人发展的影响十分关注。
📝示例：热情使我坚持自己的信念，并督促我完成艰难的任务。
📝示例：这些路几乎不能通行。但是，我们最终还是到达了营地。